Index: trunk/server/doc/install-fedora
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--- trunk/server/doc/install-fedora	(revision 2348)
+++ trunk/server/doc/install-fedora	(revision 2349)
@@ -60,10 +60,10 @@
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-Our Subversion repository lives at svn://scripts.mit.edu/. Our hosts bind to
-scripts.mit.edu on localhost. Unfortunately, this means that checking out the
-subversion repository on a new server while you're in the process of setting it
-up sometimes won't work. In particular, if the server is already binding the
-scripts.mit.edu IP address, but not yet serving svn, your attempt to do the
-checkout will connect to the local machine and fail.
+Our Subversion repository lives at svn://scripts.mit.edu/. Our realservers bind
+to scripts.mit.edu on localhost. Unfortunately, this means that checking out
+the subversion repository on a new server while you're in the process of
+setting it up sometimes won't work. In particular, if the server is already
+binding the scripts.mit.edu IP address, but not yet serving svn, your attempt
+to do the checkout will connect to the local machine and fail.
 
 Any of the following should let you evade this issue:
@@ -72,7 +72,7 @@
   reboot. Ordinarily, you won't need to do any commits or updates between the
   reboot and when LDAP and svn:// serving are working.
-* Temporarily down the lo alias with the scripts.mit.edu IP address
-  (18.181.0.43; seems to be lo:3 semi-consistently)
-* Do your svn checkout from a current host, instead of scripts.mit.edu
-  (for example, use svn://whole-enchilada.mit.edu/). Don't forget to
-  svn switch --relocate to scripts.mit.edu once the server is set up.
+* Temporarily down lo:3 (the lo alias with the scripts.mit.edu IP address,
+  18.181.0.43)
+* Do your svn checkout from a current realserver, instead of scripts.mit.edu
+  (for example, use svn://whole-enchilada.mit.edu/). Don't forget to svn switch
+  --relocate to scripts.mit.edu once the server is set up.